Deirdre: I definitely agree with you on your first blog that relationships come down to personal beliefs. You do a great job of using the article but some more of your own great ideas would add a lot :) I noticed some minor spelling issues : "Image if this was not the case. It would be a crazy would!" I think you meant 'Imagine' and 'world.' :) In you second blog I like how you ask the question "Why does it continue to take so long for our society to accept human sexuality when there is now a lot of evidence that homosexuality could stem back as far as we can study?" I agree!!! Why?? I think you have great ideas and you should add more of your own to your posts :)
Kayla: In your first blog I like how you discuss the effects a purely biological outlook on love could have. Lots of wrong people would be together because they'd think lust equated to love! You have good ideas so if you expanded on what mating rituals would change that would add even more to it! Your first paragraph on your second blog is such a great introduction! I can really hear your voice in your writing! I also like how you leave the reader to guess your own opinion on the matter since you write very unbiasedly :)
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